Feedback from our presentation

When we showed our first cut of our title sequence the class had given us feedback about our work. there was a rating section where they had to choose how many stars our title sequence was worth, 1 star was rated "in need of serious work" 2 stars being "it definitely has potential" and 3 stars saying "why isn't it on MTV already". the majority of the vote was between 2/3 stars which is good because our work was liked by teenagers who are our target audience.

The next section was 3 paragraphs asking the audience member "the elements that worked" "Things that need developing" and "things that don't work are". some comments were similar such as the music worked really well and the cinematography and editing was good, they liked the idea of our title sequence, they liked the fact we had the different characters looking at the book plus that we edited videos into the book.

However the comments weren't all good, we did have some improving to do within the title sequence. they said to makes sure camera shots weren't shaky and that blank spaces need to be filled. An every feedback sheet had this comment " make the images appear before the page turns, maybe re shoot with pictures in the book". so from this feedback we went back and reshot all the scenes where characters turned the book and added pictures on to the area where the video will be played of them.